Reviews For Eternally Yours

2017.01.01 - 11:43AM
13: Chapter 13

Please tell me someone(hopefully Rose) was spying on them? And that they will tell Rose? Or Jackie? Because the Doctor needs a good ol' Jackie Tyler slap.
He does realise that if the it doesn't matter if the guardians are after him or Rose, they will still go after Rose, right? I mean I would if I were a villain going after the Doctor. After all the best way to hurt people is to go after their loved ones. So Rose would be safer with the Doctor. Even if he is a idiotic git who needs to be knocked off of his pedestal and start thing logically instead of with his guilt.

AM2
2013.09.06 - 10:52AM
13: Chapter 13

AHHH! The doctor is being such a prat! I know he thinks he's being noble but... ANYHOW, good chapter and I look forward to seeing what you do next.

Author's Response: Thanks! He is just being him. I hated to have him do this, thinking it was too expected and then realized it was expected because that is exactly what he\'d do. The question becomes what would Rose do? ;)

2013.09.06 - 01:31AM
13: Chapter 13

Oh for gods sake, Doctor!!! When will he learn? Please be kind to Rose!

Author's Response: Lol! He may be an alien but he\'s still male ...

2013.09.05 - 09:00PM
13: Chapter 13

You know how I feel about this chapter, chica. I...I...grrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!! I want to beat the living crap outta him! But I have a consolation so I'm biding my time till the next chapter. Even though I know, I still want to ring his gorgeous neck! Brilliant as always!!

Author's Response: :) I\'ve actually reconsidered some things since we hashed it all out ... we\'ll see where it goes ;)

2013.09.05 - 08:55PM
13: Chapter 13

Typical, typical Doctor! Such an idiot sometimes! I know he just wants them safe, but at such a heavy cost. *sigh*

Loved the chapter! Even if the Doctor made me growl more than once...lol.

Author's Response: Sigh, what can I say? He\'s an alien git. But, Rose is such a clever girl you just know she\'ll set him strAight ;)

AM2
2013.09.05 - 04:08PM
12: Chapter 12

This is a great story and while I know you want to work on your new plot bunny, finishing this would be so wonderful. I am left with the questions of "What was the Doctor going to tell Rose about accepting Jake if he were full human?" "What is going on with these black/white/red beings?" "Will there be more children?" "Will Rose realize what's happened to her body and will the Doctor be alright with it?" SO many questions, so little time to write! ;)

Author's Response: Lol, glad you\'re enjoying it! I\'ll post the next chapter tonight. Should be up by tomorrow morning!

2013.09.02 - 08:45PM
12: Chapter 12

So intrigued! And you have me quite nervous with all those foreboding words about the upcoming chapter. I am still so frustrated with the Doctor, though I guess that is to be expected, considering. :)

Author's Response: I\'m frustrated with him too :p

2013.09.02 - 07:38AM
12: Chapter 12

Another great chapter! As for the next, I can wait... I'd rather not, but I can... :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Think I\'ll post mid week :)

2013.08.30 - 11:05PM
12: Chapter 12

The Doctor with Jake was such an adorable scene! Then add Jack and the squabble over proper sandcastles and I couldn't stop giggling. :D The mystery with Rose deepens along with my curiosity. And now I can't help but wonder how much the Doctor knows...and what he's not telling her.

And now...decisions, decisions! I'm such a sucker for instant gratification. But then, the protracted tension makes the payoff all the sweeter, so... I'm torn! So I shall trust your judgment and love it either way. ;)

Author's Response: :) Glad you liked it. The beach scene ... it just came to me and I could so clearly see Jack and the Doctor, egos running rampant, lol, makes me laugh every time! I\'m thinking I\'ll post chapter 13 mid week. It has one heck of a cliffhanger and I just know there will be wailing and gnashing of teeth; best to post when the next chapter is closer to completion lest I be hunted down :)

TeaWithLemon
2013.08.30 - 06:39PM
12: Chapter 12

Hard to say, really. I am dying to know about the whole badwolf mystery (because really, I have no clue and I suck at mysteries) and how it is going to be resolved and what the Doctor knows...on the other hand, you were chatting about "A New Path" in chat a couple of weeks ago and it sounds good too. I vote for both!

Author's Response: Lol, you want to have your cake and eat it too! I\'m good with that ;)

2013.08.30 - 03:42PM
12: Chapter 12

*happy dance happy dance* I loved the bit with Jack and the Doctor "teaching" Jake how to build sandcastles. I can envision them arguing over that! I'm holding my tongue and allowing others to voice what they want. Either way, I'll be happy! But you know what the mean part of me wants lol!

Author's Response: Lol, on ff.net two say doesn\'t matter but if there is a big cliffie then wait ... define big.

2013.08.29 - 11:22PM
11: Chapter 11: Decisions

I am so behind in my reading, but can I just say... I am beyond thrilled that you got past your block on this one?!!! :) Even mentioned it to ash. You started off showing us strong, confident 'take on the universes' Rose, but when it comes to him... I just want to hug her.
And then, ooooh, then he... he... completely does what he always does; he hides. Grr.
So excited for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, strong Rose kind of disappeared in the face of her uncertainty and insecurities over the Doctor. I\'ll be posting the next chapter, possibly two, when Ash gives me the nod. Just don\'t hurt me after you read them :)

2013.08.23 - 11:50PM
11: Chapter 11: Decisions

*squee* SO happy to see this new chapter! And it was certainly worth the wait. Oh, the ever-present complications for these two. They want the same things, but fear they can't have them. Never simple, eh?

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Not sure y\'all won\'t be burning me in effigy soon, lol

2013.08.23 - 07:36PM
11: Chapter 11: Decisions

Agh!!!! Grrr!!!! I'm gonna slap 'im! You daft friggin....ay Dios mío. El es un hombre más.... He's got me so worked up I'm rambling in Spanish. I tend to do that when I'm mad. I LOVED what you did. Better than anything I suggested. But you're a genius, so I'd expect nothing less!!! My heart breaks for Rose because I understand that feeling. Not when it comes to loving an alien obviously, but the no worth mentality. And you wrote it beautifully. Heart aching but beautiful. Awesome, girlie!!!

Author's Response: Lol, us confessing to having a bit of Ricky Ricardo in us? :p Don\'t know about being a genius, in fact I highly doubt it, but I wracked my brain and this is what came out!

2013.08.23 - 07:32PM
11: Chapter 11: Decisions

It should be an interesting proposal!

Author's Response: Lol, with the Doctor you just know it\'s going to get worse before it gets better and that his cheek will be sore before he utters that proposal ... if he ever gets the courage to that is!