This is so perfect! So many beautiful tiny details (twister with religious significance! the lost garden!) that all add up to such a strong tone that really fits this whole early stage of Ace and 7's relationship. I love how you write them- the ending in particular is so emotion inducing. Thank you for sharing your lovely writing !
Everyone's said the good stuff, but I'll throw my 2 cents in and ask for MORE! :)
I really like how real you made Ace; she seemed like a real girl being introduced to someone she instinctively liked, but was not sure about. This is a lovely little vignette, filled with the words that weren't said. Thank you for writing it.
This is wonderful - a great bit of Seven and Ace, perfectly them, and it's great.