Well done--it's hard to believe that it was your first try! ^.^
Author's Response: Thank you!!! What a lovely thing to say. :)
Oh, this was gorgeous! A very well-written glimpse that captures Rose's thoughts and emotions at that pivotal moment in her life.
Author's Response: Okay, I\'m having a slight fangirl moment. That means so much coming from you! Thank you!! :)
You did a great job of relating Rose's feelings to us. You can see how much she was torn between her past and future.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad that it translated well, and really appreciate the reviews. :)
This is very nice! A well-characterized snapshot of Rose at that moment.
I hope you keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your encouragement!
I thought that was lovely. You described Rose and her emotions/feelings very well with that scene. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was very nervous about posting. You just made my day!