I'm not sure who I feel for more here. I mean poor John, but can he entirely blame Rose for being a bit confused and upset?
Eeeep, just let there be a happy ending.
Ok, what in the world happened between them? The tension is bristling! Great chapter.
This good. The 1st 2 paragraphs were a bit of an info dump, but after that it I really liked it. I could just those bushy eyebrows narrowing and those eyes flash when he saw her. I look forward to the next chapter.
This sounds very promising!
This is very intriguing, and I am looking forward to reading how Rose comes to her senses.
A prequel to The Visitor, that is. ;)
This is great - a prequel to The Stranger! I can't wait to see how this year apart plays out for the both of them. I hope you have plans for writing the rest of their time together right up until the Doctor makes his visit... Can't wait for more!