Reviews For The Christmas Star

You know, this truly rocked!!! We'll done!

Nice conclusion! I loved this chapter. Especially Doctor and Rose communication. You're a very good writer! I love your rewrite of series 3. Can't wait to see how you change series 4 as well. It's very original

Nice conclusion! I love how Rose and the Doctor interacted in this chapter - it's very sweet.

Ahh, the Doctor having one of his best moments, seeing that Rose needs some time, he might learning... This was wonderful.

Author's Response: He\'s not totally blind to what people need ya know, despite what Eleven would have you think.

Very sweet.

The spot on dialogue of the Doctor, Donna and Rose just leaves me squee-ing. I also love the mystery of the Huon particles with Rose. You're just squee-ing me all over and I can't stand it! I know you have RL going on, but please, please update soon! I don't care about the fact that this has been aired before; your originality has me salivating as if it's never been played! (sigh) I think...I really think....you're getting me my muse back. She's been on vaca for quite a while, but your writing is waking her up, snuffling and snorting. Oh, where's my pen?!? Paper? While you're updating, I'll get busy, too....

Author's Response:

Very nicely done.

Lol I love this! Your writing is amazing and very good, I like that you're giving Rose new dialogues and its not just a copy paste of transcript.

I can't wait till the Doctor goes all Oncoming Storm on the Racnoss for trying to hurt Rose! Update ASAP!

Author's Response: I will, don\'t worry. XD

Brilliant chapter, it's nice to know the Doctor is observant as ever ;)

Author's Response: *pats Ten on the head* Yeeeaaaah.

Awesome chapter, can't wait for more!!!

Well done. :)

Well done. :)

The TARDIS trying to help Rose is sweet, as is the relationship between the Doctor and Rose. You can see he's trying harder to be there for her. Which makes a lot of sense.

Love Rose's thoughts on Donna and Lance, made me giggle. But love the way you're working Rose into this story!

loved how the TARDIS tried to ease her mind by singing her to sleep...they truly have a special connection and although she could never replace Jackie, she could be the next best thing!

Author's Response: The TARDIS knows how to help Rose. The TARDIS lost all of her sisters in the war and she probably helped the Doctor cope after the loss of Gallifrey. Have you seen the episode with Sexy? She says that she always took the Doctor where he \"needed to go\" and I am a firm believer that that includes London, 2005 so he could meet Rose. Because Rose helped him, she convinced him to keep living in a way no one else in the universe could. So the TARDIS gave him the push in the right direction.
And now there\'s poor Rose, practically orphaned, and the TARDIS knows that she needs to rest, so she does all she can to help her fall asleep fast.

Ohhhh, this chapter is kind of heartbreaking. Poor Rose, though I love that everyone is threatening the Doctor on her behalf.

EVEN DONNA!! And that was perfect! Donna may not have the most confidence in herself but I love that she's prepared to protect someone she doesn't even know. It's perfect!

Author's Response: Well, Donna thinks she\'s just been kidnapped...so she\'s like AW HAYEELLL NO.