This is lovely! I do hope you intend to update soon - the story premise is very good. I love your characterizations.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Most of it is finished but, I haven\'t edited it. Daniel got in the way :)
Is this you bringing this over from fan fic.net? I started it over there and loved it.
How did I miss this gem? I know this story will be as interesting and nuanced as Broken.
You have the start of a great story here. I've greatly enjoyed the groundwork so far. Really looking forward to reading how the rescue goes. You do a great job with character development, and providing great story depth. Love it and look forward to reading more. :)