first of all, i'm extremely grateful to you for taking on this monster. i didn't know i needed this story until i started it. a lot of writers who try to tackle this just sort of throw rose into s3 and hope for the best, but i love the way you integrated her into the story and changed the order up a bit.
also, for a medical tidbit in chapter 35: superficial head wounds bleed a lot more and look a lot worse than they are, and in fact applying direct pressure too hard will cause problems. martha might know this if she's learned about trauma in her pre med training, but maybe not yet idk. also if it's just a cut she might not be swaying from just that yet! i realize the story is several years old now, but it's something i noticed.
again, thanks for writing this!! i can't wait to finish, but i also really don't want it to be over lol.
I loved this completely brilliant story! You're a great writer, and I cannot wait to read more in this series :)
Author's Response: There\'s more already :D Go look on my profile!!
Beautiful, sweet end to a wonderful story! Can 't wait for the sequel! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Excellent end to an excellent story. Can't wait for the next one in the line. You surprised me with Time Crash didn't think you would do that. Can't believe its finished though, I had been stalking this fic since you published it, being the lurking reading but then started commenting few chapters in. May your muse live on and continues all the giving.
Author's Response: I didn\'t originally intend to but when I realizing having Rose\'s return to Torchwood in this story wouldn\'t fit and would spoil events in the other story, I decided I needed something new. This fit.
Thank you ^^
This was a fantastic story! I loved every single chapter. So glad you're going to continue the verse! In the meantime....I'm going to go reread it again!! ^_^ again, great job. Thanks for the brilliant story!
Author's Response: Hey, and while you do, see if you can\'t catch any foreshadowing I did way back when.
I can't believe it's over! What an epic tale. Congratulations. I've laughed and cried, and all the emotions reading this , and can honestly say I can't wait till you do another. But do your homework first!
Author's Response: SUMMER BREAK! NO HOMEWORK! :D
Congrats on finishing this epic! (417k words is a massive labor of love). It's been fantastic, start to finish. I'm quite looking forward to the continuation of this series!
I loved the way you wrapped up this story with Time Crash, and the Doctor's little speech to Rose at the end was thoroughly heart-melting. Beautiful work!
Author's Response: :D thankies!
omfg right?? I didn\'t plan that. The Doctor did that on his own.
Loved the whole thing, beginning to end. If there is going to be another installment, I can't wait to start reading it. Well done. :)
Author's Response: There will be!! Keep an eye out!
Author's Response: Blimey, you\'ve been here since the beginning though, haven\'t you?
Congratulations on a great story. I liked that you included Time Crash even though I have become somewhat jaded towards that short...something about the writer and the insistence on paradoxes..but I like Five lots and enjoyed seeing him.
I loved every chapter - even the ones that made me bite my fingernails. Thank you so much for this. Very much looking forward to new installments.
I can remember starting reading your stories around New Year's of my freshman year, waaaay back in 2012. It's been a lot of fun (with some edge-of-my-seat fretting), and I'm looking forward to reading whatever else you'll post (though I can't help wondering if you intend to do the stuck-in-1969 side of Blink at some point).
I'm still chuckling over how long it took Fivey to catch on that he was talking to himself. In between squeeing over the Doctor's speech/explanation to Rose near the end, naturally.
Author's Response: Yeah, you\'ve been here from almost the beginning. Glad you stuck with it ^-^
(Soon.)
I can't believe I discovered this excellent story only at Christmastime. I've enjoyed every word and every arc. Thank you for wrapping it up so wonderfully and leaving me with the hope that there WILL be more!
Author's Response: There will be
Good... he didn't go with the does it need saying bullshit... Somehow I expected the story to end after Martha's call (I want to know how that went) so, now even himself thinks they are married (he didn't correct himself).. I guess they pretty much already are. Anyway, what part is it going ti be next? Blink? Torchwood? I seriously hope that is Blink... I want to know what happened during her Torchwood time but I suffered a lot during their separation... I'm not ready for another go! xD and FUCK YOU AUTOCORRECT thanks to this shit it took me 20 minutes to write that thing and It is in spanish (since I'm mexican) Try to write in english when your fucking thingy is programed in another languaje... Anyway, farewell and are we gonna meet Donna again? I LOVE her and another doubt... is it in your universe Gallifrey out there?
Author's Response: They were short on time and, really, there was no need to correct him about the marriage thing.
Torchwood is most likely next.
Donna comes later but yiss.
No. IT\'S GONE. THE MAYPOLE CHILDREN ARE DEAD.
I'm sad to see it end, but it was a wonderful trip. Thank you for your persistent and consistent updates, as well as your brilliant story overall.
Author's Response: :D Thank you!!
Well, your story is now officially too long for a good reread..but is it too selfish to hope you don't end any time soon? Just keep writing and let them stay together for some happy times now.
Author's Response: Well, if that\'s how you feel.
The next chapter is the last. But take a look at this here