2012.10.14 - 10:32AM
5: Chapter 5

oh oh break my heart

I wood of fut river wud lest her daughter have the sum growing up as her with out her mum and dad

hopeliy the baby will come look for them and river till amy and Rory what has hapd

love this
thank you vrey much

and put up the next past of the story up soon

2012.10.14 - 10:31AM
5: Chapter 5

oh oh break my heart

I wood of fut river wud lest her daughter have the sum growing up as her with out her mum and dad

hopeliy the baby will come look for them and river till amy and Rory what has hapd

love this
thank you vrey much

and put up the next past of the story up soon

2012.10.14 - 10:30AM
5: Chapter 5

oh oh break my heart

I wood of fut river wud lest her daughter have the sum growing up as her with out her mum and dad

hopeliy the baby will come look for them and river till amy and Rory what has hapd

love this
thank you vrey much

and put up the next past of the story up soon

2012.10.09 - 09:45PM
5: Chapter 5

OMG. From sly humor to heartbreak.

Well done!

And I can't wait to see who that baby grows up to be... :D

2012.10.09 - 09:42PM
4: Chapter 4

“I've seen UNIT aim for discreet. It usually ends with something getting blown up.”

“A lot's changed since the '70s,” said Martha. She frowned. “Or was it the '80s?”

“I can never remember,” said the Doctor with a shrug.


OMG. LOL!

2012.10.09 - 09:31PM
3: Chapter 3

“The Perfect One was chosen by the gods to lead our people — all people — to a new age of peace and enlightenment.”

Because Enlightenment worked out so well the last time around!

“In the TARDIS. In the library by the swimming pool. With handcuffs.”

And I was going to guess Colonel Mustard in the Conservatory with the Lead Pipe! ;)

2012.10.05 - 06:51PM
5: Chapter 5

Oh, oh, rip out my heart. I hope that's not the end.... :(

2012.10.05 - 03:14PM
4: Chapter 4

i love it
doctor's baby name “Amelia Song

amy wood love him for it.
my grandughter name is my first name

put up the next bit to is story up soon

thank you

2012.10.05 - 03:07PM
3: Chapter 3

how do you do it ?

you mad you sad went is cam up in the story

The Perfect One,” said the Doctor, “is due to be sacrificed on her 15th birthday
to allow the gods to arrive via some mythical process that did I mention involves the Harmonious Siblings
killing our daughter?”

thank you very much

2012.10.05 - 03:02PM
2: Chapter 2

i love it

cep up the good work

thank you very much

2012.10.05 - 02:10PM
4: Chapter 4

You. YOU. My goodness. My talent feels like a sopping squib next to your astounding characterisation. Your dialogue actually makes me laugh out loud while reading, and that's just brilliant. Fantastic pacing, wonderful plot. Really enjoyable story by a superb writer -x-

2012.10.05 - 12:03AM
4: Chapter 4

EEEEEK! from me, too. I suppose that is the response for pretty much anybody when the Master shows up at his door, but especially for our dear heroes. Please carry on. I feel like an open-mouthed baby bird, eager for more.

2012.10.04 - 10:14PM
4: Chapter 4

Auugh, this is so awesome. Keep doing this!!

2012.10.04 - 09:26PM
4: Chapter 4

Eeek! Well, the Master probably doesn't want to kill the baby for *religious* reasons...

2012.10.04 - 05:09PM
4: Chapter 4

Aaaaaaaa!

That is all.

(eek!)