2013.12.17 - 08:48PM
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Ohh this is dark, I'd be interested in seeing this adapted as a short film. Quite provocative I'd wager.

2013.09.07 - 04:50PM
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EEK, the thought of an eyeless Doctor sounds like something from a creepypasta *shiver* Anyway, this was HARSH! Dark! You write Eleven as being even more ruthless than how he is by Series 7!

2012.12.14 - 12:59PM
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Oh wow and yikes! That is harsh, even by my standards!

2012.12.13 - 12:50PM
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HELL'S BELLS!!!!

2012.12.11 - 08:11PM
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Here from the rec on Calufrax... OMG. My mouth is literally hanging open!

Bravo!

2012.12.11 - 04:59PM
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What a chilling, dark tone this story achieves. Good job maintaining the intensity throughout.

2012.10.14 - 09:25PM
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OMG..I WAS HOPING THIS ONE WAS HERE...ohhhh, so HORRIFYING AND GORGEOUSLY DARK...

~WIBBLES IN A CORNER~

Mandy

2012.09.30 - 03:12PM
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Oh. Ouch. Horrific, but well done.