2013.03.21 - 12:31PM
7: Chapter 7

I love when I find a new story. A really good one. A really, really good one with plot (although, probably most of them have plot and I'm just, um, reading ones that, um havenoplot) and Rose and Nine! I *love* Rose and Nine! Anywa. Sort of a babbling review. I'd write more but I've only just finished chapter 7 and you introduced Jack Harkness. Seriously? Meeting everything on the wish list? I love your UST, too. Oh gosh. Gotta go read.

Author's Response: Thanks! And hey, happy to check off stuff on the wishlist! Enjoy!

2012.08.31 - 12:14AM
7: Chapter 7

Yay! I found this fic again! I love how the Doctor is already instinctively protecting Rose. And hooray for Jack!

Author's Response: Jack makes everything more awesome! And thanks!

2012.08.30 - 01:54PM
7: Chapter 7

I so love this fic! Characters are so true, in both dialogue and motivation. I ADORE that your got the three back together again!

Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. Well done.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love having Rose, Jack, and Nine back together, too! It\'s more challenging that I originally thought, working the group dynamics of the three together in a completely new circumstance. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it!

2012.08.27 - 04:34PM
7: Chapter 7

This is very well done! Characters are spot on, dialog is excellent, pacing and tone are captivating. Look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Definitely more to come!

2012.08.26 - 11:25AM
7: Chapter 7

Yay!!! :) Great chapter--awesome having Jack there with them!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

2012.08.26 - 08:01AM
7: Chapter 7

So glad to see Jack join them!

Author's Response: Go Team TARDIS!

2012.08.25 - 11:30PM
7: Chapter 7

Jaaaaaaack! Just when I thought this story couldn't get any more temporally complicated. And oh, this would explain so much about Jack's time at Torchwood One. Fantastic.

Author's Response: Jack\'s been busy, that\'s for sure!

2012.08.25 - 11:28PM
7: Chapter 7

I always love Jack's POV:

Jack shifted uncomfortably. She clearly had no idea what had happened to him, and he was unsure about how to break the news. Honestly, he wasn’t sure if he should tell her at all–if the Doctor from her timeline had known what had happened to him but had kept it a secret from Rose…well, this had Doctor-protects-Rose-at-all-costs fingerprints all over it.

Great chapter and fantastic surprise. I was not expecting Jack!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Jack is definitely an interesting perspective to write.

2012.08.25 - 11:04PM
7: Chapter 7

Oh the timey whimeyness of it all. Team TARDIS together again and each of them from a different time. Poor Jack. It must be so hard to see the Doctor and Rose again after they had left him behind. I am so glad the Doctor decided to cooperate with Jack and not tell Rose what he knows is wrong with him.

This is true above all else:
“Ok,” he agreed, and he felt her relax against him. In some ways, it was reassuring–nothing had really changed. The Doctor would always protect Rose first and foremost, and Rose would always try to shield the Doctor.

Thank you for another super interesting chapter. I cannot wait to see where you take us form here.

Author's Response: Thanks! More timeline mayhem ahead, definitely.

2012.08.25 - 11:01PM
7: Chapter 7

Ahhh! You updated and I'm so glad. I love how Rose flip-flops between trusting Jack to trusting the Doctor. That would be the ultimate nightmare for her since she loves them both.

Write moar! :D

Author's Response: I shall! I am! I will! Promise! And thanks!