Reviews For TD - Lost

2012.08.13 - 12:22PM
103: Chapter 103

Oooops!

And Donna isn't John's mother, the TARDIS is. :)

Author's Response: I think John would probably argue about any of them being his mother and that the Doctor\'s mother is kind of his mother, but genetically Donna and the Doctor are his parents through metacrisis, the TARDIS just gave the genetics a shove in the right direction.

2012.08.13 - 12:14PM
102: Chapter 102

“Death by eggy pump.” Yeah, that will teach her for hurting Jack and the Doctor! XD XD XD

Author's Response: Death by eggy pump has got to be one of the worst ways to go.

2012.08.13 - 12:08PM
101: Chapter 101

I was thinking about the Doctor and Jack and the time they were imprisoned. We really don't know how long they were there, do we? The Doctor, let alone Jack, is very stubborn and the time it took for the pest controller to break him must have been nearly forever.

So, just how long was it before the Doctor got free and escaped? You did say that he escaped three times, I think, but how long was it between the escapes? Days? Weeks? Months? YEARS?!

The same can be said for Jack. How long has he been down there in the dark?

I don't think John is going to like what he find when he sees Jack again.

Author's Response: I have no intention of extending the time they were incarcerated. We know it is a week to ten days, but the Chulans are well practised at getting what they want, so the torture was intensive.

2012.08.13 - 11:57AM
100: Chapter 100

John is going to end up hurt, isn't he?! Promise or not, he's going to do something dumb. :/

Author's Response: Oh, have more faith in him...

2012.08.13 - 10:40AM
105: Chapter 105

Aaah, they're there just in time, then.
Or, I guess, too late - as he's just broken down, but I was so afraid hed already given in..

Author's Response: I think it just means that he\'d been kept under the hood and had no contact with anyone since the last time, or he would have given in by now, I am kind of hoping that he\'d have picked himself back up and figured out how to get away from there. I mean it wouldn\'t be the first time he\'d stolen a ship and run would it?

2012.08.12 - 10:35PM
103: Chapter 103

Way to go Greg!

Author's Response: He didn\'t mean to...

2012.08.12 - 10:31PM
102: Chapter 102

Killing her with egg pumps? Now that was funny.

Author's Response: There is nothing like an eggy pump to get wicked queens running for the hills.

2012.08.12 - 10:30PM
103: Chapter 103

Oh crap. They couldn't get off the TARDIS good before setting off an alarm? Urgh

Author's Response: Yeah, bit of a bad start to their rescue mission, hopefully it\'s not all lost though.

2012.08.12 - 10:23PM
103: Chapter 103

Oh blimey!

Author's Response: It;\'s not boding too well at the moment.

2012.08.12 - 10:12PM
102: Chapter 102

eggy pumps? sounds like a real gas, lol!

Author's Response: Yeah, lol.

2012.08.12 - 05:16PM
100: Chapter 100

What is it with John now willing to give Sue a promise? Sheesh.

Author's Response: It never really bodes well does it? It\'s like the curse of \'a quiet day\' at work!

2012.08.12 - 02:38PM
100: Chapter 100

Amazing. The Chula have managed to torture not just 2 men, but 3 men. John is getting tortured just as surely as Eleven.

Wow, now that is devious. You have found a way to do a two-way Doctor!Whump story. ;-)

Author's Response: Well, you can\'t do one and not the other can you? That just wouldn\'t be fair, and it kind of gives us a window into what happened that doesn\'t need the Doctor going into it over and over again.

2012.08.11 - 08:43AM
99: Chapter 99

Author's Response: Hopefully I will find out tonight if he has or not, and then you will too. I am not going to stop to type until I have got the Captain back so... that lot of chapters will be next, either as a job lot or one at a time depending on how mean I am feeling lol.

OMG, K... you are so mean!!! :-D Several times a day I check here to see if there's anything in the queue waiting to be approved. LOL!

Author's Response: Lol, I dont mean to be mean, lol. It is just quite hard at the moment to find the time to write / type etc as work is a bit mad.

2012.08.07 - 12:04AM
99: Chapter 99

Trying not to get my hopes up for the rescue-part. What if it turns out the Doctor was right?

Author's Response: Hopefully I will find out tonight if he has or not, and then you will too. I am not going to stop to type until I have got the Captain back so... that lot of chapters will be next, either as a job lot or one at a time depending on how mean I am feeling lol.

2012.08.06 - 10:49PM
99: Chapter 99

This is getting too sad. They need to get Jack back so he can tell the Doctor what happened. The only question is will the Doctor believe him?!

And Sue or John telling the Doctor he's hurting John through their bond might make things worse. He wouldn't want to hurt his little brother.

Author's Response: I cant wondering what it will do to Jack if he hasn\'t defected to the High Priestess and he finds out the Doctor believes that he has.

Hopefully as the Doctor becomes more aware there will be less chance of him \'hurting\' John through their psychic dreams.