Reviews For TD - Lost

2012.08.23 - 10:13PM
114: Chapter 114

John is good when it comes to getting Jack and the Doctor to to what he says. Sue's rubbed off on him. And I think Jack wants to get everything out in the open. That's just how he gets things done. :)

Author's Response: I think John is the perfect example of \'he knows what to do and what other people should do but he\'s not going to be able to see for himself when it is him that needs to be doing it\', much the same as the Doctor and to some extent the Captain, they know how to deal with things, they know how to offer the advice, but following advice and dealing with things themselves? That is another thing altogether.

2012.08.23 - 07:52PM
116: Chapter 116

A horrid start in life! Poor Jack was betrayed by those he was supposed to trust. no wonder he's the way he is.

That poor man needs a lot of hugs!

Author's Response: I think Jack is openly Gregarious but he is also highly loyal to his friends and I think it would have really hurt him a lot to have been betrayed.

2012.08.23 - 07:42PM
115: Chapter 115

At least they are talking.

Author's Response: It is a start and it is an important part of the healing process for both of them.

2012.08.23 - 11:24AM
113: Chapter 113

Jack and the Doctor are both going to be having guilt trips and flashbacks. Poor guys!

Author's Response: They both have a long way to go in order to get over this and get back to normal, hopefully they will embrace the healing that they need to do, rather than try and paper over it and be all flowery and happy.

2012.08.23 - 11:24AM
114: Chapter 114

now why would he say that? That is just going to open up another can of worms that no one was thinking about. Oh man the healing will now begin but it is not going to be pretty and that's what i can't wait to read. Still loving this story, i don't even care that you have obviously given up on DS for now.

Author's Response: DS is still there. I\'ve not abandonned it, I just can\'t think about it, and I dont have time to do more than one story at a time. I dont know how people do it when they have more than one on the go at any one time.

2012.08.23 - 11:24AM
114: Chapter 114

now why would he say that? That is just going to open up another can of worms that no one was thinking about. Oh man the healing will now begin but it is not going to be pretty and that's what i can't wait to read. Still loving this story, i don't even care that you have obviously given up on DS for now.

Author's Response: I think it was one of those slips of the tongue that let out what he really needs to talk about.

2012.08.23 - 05:25AM
1: Chapter 1

I've finally am able to review again. I think my PC is evil!

It keeps knockoing me off the system here.

Well, I'm glad they got Jack out but like some others here I think it was too easy and they are not out of the woods yet. something is going to happen.

Author's Response: Evil PC\'s are never fun.

2012.08.23 - 01:46AM
113: Chapter 113

Long way to go yet..

Author's Response: Yeah, they are both in a bad way really.

2012.08.22 - 11:55PM
113: Chapter 113

Poor Jack and poor Doctor. So broken. :(

Author's Response: Hopefully they will get there together.

2012.08.22 - 11:48PM
112: Chapter 112

I like that John didn't take sides, but why can't Jack eat?! Was there something in the honeymilk that's stopping him?

Author's Response: He can\'t eat because he has been starved.

2012.08.22 - 07:27PM
113: Chapter 113

poor jack that they are so broken but they need each other so badly. Still loving this.

Author's Response: Both Jack and the Doctor have a lot of healing to do.

2012.08.22 - 06:20PM
113: Chapter 113

My, what a fine mess these two are.

I'm assuming that Jack's condition is very similar to that of malnourished and starving children, who can only manage sugar water initially. Yet, his Artron energy is burning through the boluses of sugar very quickly? Sounds like a milkshake might not be the best thing for him.

Author's Response: With regards to Jack\'s condition, it is like a starved child, but I\'m also drawing on what I know of the treatment of long term hunger strikers in the prison/detention environment. Anyone who has not eaten for any length of time can\'t just start eating again as their body really can\'t process it. Artron energy just makes it more complicated for him.

2012.08.22 - 11:14AM
112: Chapter 112

I like the way you are drawing their confrontation out. Both are extremely stressed and ill. Your solution to have John show the Doctor telepathically what Jack went through was great. But Jack, not able to eat--that's horrible. And so stubborn. Good chaptrs.

Author's Response: Glad that you are enjoying the chapters. It makes sense for this to be the difficult part after what they have all been through.

2012.08.22 - 01:06AM
112: Chapter 112

aww man i thought they were going to come face to face in this chapter damn you. Cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Lol, patience.

2012.08.21 - 10:27PM
111: Chapter 111

I'm glad John talked some sense into him, but I keep thinking back to Jacko's dream. What if they're still in the other universe and this is all faked?!

Author's Response: That is an interesting idea.