Reviews For First Night

2014.03.11 - 11:23AM
1: Chapter 1

Lovely.

A_Who_in_Whoville
2011.12.11 - 07:29PM
1: Chapter 1

This was lovely. I know you indicate it is complete, but you write them so well... any chance of a series? :D

This was particularly nice:'
I just find Id rather keep you in visual proximity until Im sure this isnt a dream.

Great job.

Author's Response: Re: a series... I\'ve actually been thinking about it. A series of firsts... hmmm...

2011.12.10 - 05:30PM
1: Chapter 1

Very well done. I really felt like you captured their characters. I like how you balanced the angst with hope.

2011.12.10 - 09:47AM
1: Chapter 1

Wonderful story. Very believable and the voices rang true. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. That their voices felt real is, to me, the highest compliment.