Oh, heartbreakingly beautiful.
The rawness you paint between them is what makes this work - a taste of the dark honey behind their banter.
Utterly spectacular! :D
Great piece, could visualise and see the scenes playing out.
That was so very good. It felt like a real day in the life. And I love the River lines, "I don't do jealousy." Yes! Perfect.
Enjoyed that very much.