This was fantastic! Very clever premise for the Doctor and Rose meeting Pete's World's Donna!
This was a great from beginning to end! I also love the format of it, it's so original and so very very clever! I had to read it twice to make sure I caught all the little hints. Figured it was Donna when the narrator said "wizard", and it was cool to go back and dissect the doctors and roses first impression of "Mary jones".
I absolute adopt this into my head cannon, I cannot imagine a world where a doctor exists with his two best mates - rose and Donna! This was a really good read! Molto Bene!
That was just so BRILLIANT, AND FUNNY AND SO, SO CLEVER!!!! I really loved this!
It had wit, love and a wonderful surprise. The papercut remark had me laughing out loud. And they got keep Donna!
This was a great story, thank you for sharing it. :)
Brilliant! When the maroon 'clashed with her hair' and she was a 'temping temp', I hoped it was Donna! Very well done and very enjoyable to read. Thank you!!
Author's Response: Thank me? Nah! Thank YOU for reading and taking the time to comment
Very clever! I kind of wondered if it wasn't Donna when she called him skinny. Very very creative!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted the reveal to be a surprise but not really a surprise, if that makes sense.
This was awesome! It had a fun voice to it and told a great little story without going on too long. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, thanks. That\'s what I was going for...Such a compliment!
I LOVED this! Very fun story, very creative way to go about it as well. And guess who it was?? Yay! Donna! Woo hoo!
Author's Response: Thanks, Who! An let me just say, your continued inyerest and encouragement has been much appreciated!