Bitter bitter sweet sweet sweet. What they had all lost, but what they had gained? Oh my... that was a lovely yet poignant take on that part of their story... very glad frin recce'd.
Author's Response: I\'m very glad you took the time to read--and comment. :)
A lovely story. One of the best Jackie sketches I've read for a while - you really get inside her feelings for Pete. And you did well with the other two, also. Hope you'll write plenty more.
Author's Response: Thank you! More is on the way.
This one off as really, really lovely. The emotions were unique and extremely plausible. And you are right. Jackie Tyler is at the BEST!!!
Write more please... You have a nice voice.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have two more stories percolating; one is almost done and I\'ll post it soon. I\'m happy to hear they come off as realistic--that was my main aim.
I really adored this, and I'm generally "meh" about Metacrisis stories. Please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to hear you enjoyed it! I\'m happy to proselytize for my beloved metacrisis.
Adored this! Loved the 3 different POV, with the Doctor rambling and Jackie... Oh I LOVE Jackie Tyler!! Faves!
Author's Response: Thanks for your response! And a fave? You get firsties and I\'m properly verklempt!
I think Jackie is an amazing character and Camille Coduri\'s performance is stunning. Perhaps we can start a club! Really, it was Her voice nagging me to get this one written: \"No, they wouldn\'t ask me, would they?!\" etc. And I know better than to ignore Jackie Tyler.