Oh man, I just found this one. Major congratulations on creating images that are just mind-blowing. You have an amazing way with words! This story is scary, mesmerizing, and has a great unexpected revelation. Xllnt!
Author's Response: Glad that you enjoyed and thanks for taking the time to review and your kind comments.
Such a good idea, any deeper meaning behind this?
Author's Response: Thank you, no, there isn\'t really any hidden deeper meaning intended, it was just a flow of thought that I followed. Thanks for your review.
Question: What was your uni assignment?
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Uni assignment was to write a complete 2000 word short story, piece of life writing, or 40 lines of poetry - present it in a \'professional manuscript\' style and then research a magazine that you\'d send it to if you were going to get it published. Picked a magazine called The Edge, and in the piece I submitted the Doctor was a nursing assistant and not the Doctor / John Smith / A Pilgrim so it basically finished with the psychologist looking over his shoulder thinking he saw something.
That was scary. To think we probably learned to make fire not because we were cold and saw lighting burn up some tree, (and not because of the First Doctor helped us as the show suggested) but because the Silence was cold, but couldn't use Earth materials. Brilliant job.
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This was spine tingling and brillant!
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Wondeful stuff and the Doctor would make them pay.
Author's Response: He would wouldn\'t he, glad you enjoyed.
I got to admit that was very scary and made me wonder about if what she was saying was true. Great job!
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