2012.02.21 - 06:05PM
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About halfway through I hope "oh I hope they make it a three way bond with Rory" but he had to be a spoilsport and say no. Good ending though, I hadn't thought of that, and interesting idea altogether.

2011.12.06 - 02:36AM
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That last line was great.

2011.05.16 - 05:07AM
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lmao, this is amazing.

2011.05.09 - 01:36PM
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Great story and excellent ending. Love it when the TARDIS is a real character.

2011.05.09 - 02:22AM
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Best line : "The Doctor closed his mouth. “Good. It's good that you're in the room. I like you, Rory, have I mentioned that? You're very... there'" I laughed so so hard. Very well done :)

2011.05.09 - 01:02AM
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"Rory, you stand there feeling useless." You win today nostalgia!

2011.05.08 - 11:18PM
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LOL at the last line.

Still, poor Rory!

2011.05.08 - 08:44PM
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Awesome ending! Not a big fan of adulterous!Amy, but this works brilliantly.

2011.05.08 - 07:29PM
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Doctor/Tardis for the win! Really, the Doctor's love for the TARDIS is my only somewhat OTP for this fandom, though never this literally. And when other stories have written it literally, I've never believed nor liked it. But it actually really worked surprisingly well in this story. You did a really good job playing with some fanfic cliches here and making them new and interesting. Good piece. -Muse

2011.05.08 - 05:42PM
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Haha that was hotX)

2011.05.08 - 04:30PM
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Lol, I hope you're happy with it, because it worked brilliantly.