Oh, this is fantastic, sexy and layered at the same time. Especially the final line - it's lovely.
Erika!!! Hi. :) This is so poetic, and yet so bittersweet. The past and the future. Great job capturing the characters' exceedingly complex relationship. (My favorite line: "Five. Six. Eleven!")
Author's Response: Kristina!!! That made me so happy!
So sweet! I loved this. Those two are such a great couple, arent they?
Author's Response: A review! Thankies ^_^ ! They are a great couple. That incessant flirting makes my cheeks go all red!