2011.05.10 - 03:35PM
1: Chapter 1

Oh, this is fantastic, sexy and layered at the same time. Especially the final line - it's lovely.

2011.05.04 - 09:14PM
1: Chapter 1

Erika!!! Hi. :) This is so poetic, and yet so bittersweet. The past and the future. Great job capturing the characters' exceedingly complex relationship. (My favorite line: "Five. Six. Eleven!")

Author's Response: Kristina!!! That made me so happy!

2011.05.04 - 02:39AM
1: Chapter 1

So sweet! I loved this. Those two are such a great couple, arent they?

Author's Response: A review! Thankies ^_^ ! They are a great couple. That incessant flirting makes my cheeks go all red!