Haha! River making him jump through all the hoops and all he had to do was not overthink it. Perfect - and so very them.
not sure how this could be any more delightful if it tried! kudos on making the path to the *yes* well worth the read!
Converted 11/River shipper here, loving the usual banter between these two, and the fact that 11 finally admitted that he loved her - and said it out loud :) Beautiful!
I echo Erika. Brilliant work. I'm always happy to see you've updated. This was really excellent.