I love the darkness lurking around the edges of this fic. Great job!
I've greatly enjoyed your fiction on LJ, and was rather deliriously happy to find you here. It's a fascinating character study, as always. I've found none who write Amy, Rory, The Doctor and River quite on you level.
This story had a bit of dark bitterness to it which was really great. I very much enjoyed the Doctor's enforced aloufness.
I really loved this, and probably shouldn't have, seeing as I'm usually one for a good happy ending! But this was somehow perfect; you've captured 11, River and Amy and Rory perfectly, and it's bittersweet throughout. Amy knows that even though the baby could be the Doctor's, the chances of him allowing her to stay around now that he's got River and she's got Rory are very slim. But she loves him for that, and knows deep down that she's got to move on, and be with Rory. She just can't help feeling bad about it possibly being the Doctor's child, and starting the whole cycle again, or help lusting after the Doctor when she knows that he's with River most probably because he wants her to leave for her own good.
I'll stop explaining your own fic to you now!
This was truly wonderful, thank you :)