2017.10.06 - 06:33PM
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This is so beautifully and sensitively written that it doesn't seem as sad as it is, until I stop and think about it. Being given the coral and then having it broken... I've never read that before. What a churning of emotions - theirs and ours.

2011.11.06 - 07:12AM
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Very poignant. Well written.

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

2011.04.12 - 02:53PM
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Oh... Carol... that was so quietly sad... yet so obviously needed. Poor all of them, no fantastic life? Very well done... poignant and... oh... everything.

Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m sure that he\'ll be fine on his own, but, yeah, no happy ending.

2011.04.11 - 06:39PM
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Poor man, I can imagine him being very lost in the beginning. I would like to see how he gets on finding himself and what will Rose do? Nice one, Nine X

Author's Response: Hmmm....Well, it was just a one shot, but you never know!

2011.04.11 - 01:10PM
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Finding himself will be a good thing. Then he can always go back to Rose as himself and not the Doctor's shadow.

Author's Response: Right, and that is what he will do!