This was a very interesting, very different story, and his relationships with Death, Time and Pain are all unique. I like the Discworld reference.
And that was just lovely. Thank you.
Wow. This is kind of twisted and pretty dark. Bravo!
Very powerful and well done. You should be proud of this one. Cheers, James
Very nice. I wish I held the words to express the beauty of this, but I seem to be lacking today. Wonderful work.
Gorgeous; I love the canon that accepts the old Gallifreyan dieties. This was wonderful and I could see the Doctor doing exactly this for Amy and Rory.
This is so perfectly correct; and wouldn't it just be this exact type of deal the Doctor would have to accept from every demiurge that loves and hates him. Well written, well paced, illuminated without being obvious. I've favorited this with alacrity.