2014.04.16 - 06:57PM
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You have a good handle on the characters' voices, especially River's, in this story. Could've used a few more "sweeties" but I can totally see them in that setting and doing exactly that.

2010.11.23 - 08:08PM
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Another perfect little ficlet! :D

2010.11.13 - 02:40PM
1: Chapter 1

That was a delight! You have the voices down perfectly. :D

2010.11.07 - 03:05AM
1: Chapter 1

Brilliant! So very in-character