2011.06.10 - 09:49AM
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Oh gosh, the Doctor is terrifying here! And so manipulative, but I suppose Eleven always is. Even more so these days...

2010.11.03 - 02:52AM
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Rory's also getting forgetten these days...I like the parallel to cannon. Brilliant.

2010.11.03 - 02:52AM
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Rory's also getting forgetten these days...I like the parallel to cannon. Brilliant.

2010.07.24 - 12:52AM
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Ow, this series is so dark! It's like a slow motion punch in the face made of awesomeness. I love it.

2010.07.08 - 09:23PM
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Wow. This took a dark turn that I really like!

2010.07.08 - 12:29AM
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This has definitely hit the nail on the head for some dark!doctor. Amy's desperation with the situation very much threw it home.
I very much enjoyed reading it.

2010.06.30 - 08:07AM
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Well there's a frightening read! In a very good way, I mean. You've voiced them so convincingly, and it's a great concept! Added to faves.

...but my goosebumps aren't going away.

2010.06.29 - 07:35PM
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Wow, that is such a fantastic dark turn, particularly after the lightness of "Fine Tradition". Don't get me wrong, I LOVE it. And looking back, it's actually easy to see the darkness creep up in Fine Tradition as well - that Amy knows what's coming: that the Doctor, so willing to let her go to Rory, is going to take such a possessive turn.

What I particularly liked was how hard Amy held on - so desperate to keep her son as *her* son - that she was willing to leave Rory and stay with him aboard the TARDIS. It must have been horrifically boring for her, too, considering that they didn't go anywhere. Yet she stayed - and she *fought*, did everything in her power, including seduction, to try to keep a sense of normalcy.

All for naught: because Rory was forgotten. Again. And worse - it sounds as if Amy was forgotten by Martin as well. I think you caught the very dark undertones of Eleven extremely well.

I loved it. Thank you!

2010.06.29 - 07:35PM
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Stop breaking my heart you. :P

And Amy's. :(

2010.06.29 - 07:00PM
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The Doctor likes Rory, can't they co-parent?