Oh gosh! Brilliant and unexpected and slightly terrifying. Obviously AU, now that we know about River, but a very creepy take that if you think about it isn't that different then how it really happened.
Nice twist. Brilliant last line.
Love it so far. God, you write so well!
I really really like this. The subtle dark undertones throughout this sent chills down my spine.
Oh my. Heartbreaking and brilliant.
omg this could actually end *right there* and it would be just incerdibly creepy. hah. good stuff.
Oooo this is good! Can't wait for more!
That was bloody brilliant! I would love to know what happens in 8 years!
A little unexpected but well dramatized and narrated.