Oh gosh! Brilliant and unexpected and slightly terrifying. Obviously AU, now that we know about River, but a very creepy take that if you think about it isn't that different then how it really happened.
I really really like this. The subtle dark undertones throughout this sent chills down my spine.
omg this could actually end *right there* and it would be just incerdibly creepy. hah. good stuff.
That was bloody brilliant! I would love to know what happens in 8 years!
A little unexpected but well dramatized and narrated.