2011.06.10 - 09:44AM
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Oh gosh! Brilliant and unexpected and slightly terrifying. Obviously AU, now that we know about River, but a very creepy take that if you think about it isn't that different then how it really happened.

2010.11.03 - 02:47AM
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Nice twist. Brilliant last line.

2010.07.08 - 06:56PM
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Love it so far. God, you write so well!

2010.07.08 - 12:26AM
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I really really like this. The subtle dark undertones throughout this sent chills down my spine.

2010.07.02 - 01:40PM
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Oh my. Heartbreaking and brilliant.

2010.06.30 - 07:49PM
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omg this could actually end *right there* and it would be just incerdibly creepy. hah. good stuff.

2010.06.30 - 05:32PM
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Oooo this is good! Can't wait for more!

2010.06.29 - 07:47PM
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That was bloody brilliant! I would love to know what happens in 8 years!

2010.06.29 - 06:56PM
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A little unexpected but well dramatized and narrated.