Reviews For Years upon Years

2010.06.08 - 01:32PM
1: Does it Matter

I liked this moment of yours. I liked your punch line. Fits with the subject. Not taking yourself too seriously is one of the keys to acceptance. How else could the Doctor (or any of us really) smile upon reflection on a life?

Author's Response: Thank you. I guess that\'s what I was going for. Something short and sweet but it said something about the characters.

2010.06.06 - 12:41PM
1: Does it Matter

That was cute. Really. If I had to give a suggestion I'd say it could end with something punchier -- maybe something about the size of his ears -- but it was nice to see something which describes how the Doctor sees his own history.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And about the ending -- yeah, it was kind of abrupt, but it was about 3 in the morning so I said, \"screw it.\" But I could make it a little longer...