Good as a stand-a-lone and as something that might be part of a longer story.
Author's Response: maybe it will and maybe it wont ;)
Whoa... just listened.. it really fits, listening makes the story even more emotional.
I think I need a tissue now. *deep breaths*
Author's Response: *hands tissue* thanks, now just need a Ianto version
Author's Response: thanks, seriously look up the song!!!