Wow - this is really chilling, and makes perfect sense. Well done.
Author's Response: Chilling -- that\'s Lisa all over. Thank you.
Wow. I think you got Lisa here. I've yet to see anyone do better. Good work.
Author's Response: Really? Wow.
This is... Wow!! I love getting different perspectives of Lisa and what she was going through. Her compassion and fear and hate is so perfect that it takes my breath away!
The ending is superb!!
Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me how you enjoyed it! I really do appriciate these comments.
also, forgot to say, its good that you showed her dedication to him as well cos i think that often gets forgotten about. everyone talks about iantos dedication to lisa but not usually the other way round;)
Author's Response: Well, the thing that always stayed in my head is that she didn\'t kill him. Even after she\'d decided they were \"not compatable\" she didn\'t use her electric zap hand on him, she just tossed him aside. That speaks to having something left.
wow this was really good the way you portray exactly (in my opinion) lisa would've felt and have brought up these excellent points. i think in the show in a way you dotn really see her as human you see her as this thing trying to kill everyone and forget that she must've been human and there must've been a reason for ianto wanting to save her. whether he was doing the right thing is of course, always debatable but its good that you showed it wasnt as straight forward as right or wrong as there are huge fields of grey in that area for both sides;)
poor Lisa. it wasnt her fault. she didnt ask for that to happen to her.
Author's Response: No. She didn\'t.
Oh Wow! I don't think I've ever read a story that lets you feel what it would be like to be Lisa...not like this anyway.
Author's Response: Really? Oh, good. Thank you.
Fits. A glimmer of Lisa left, but not enough to do anything about it. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling.
*takes a breath I didn't realize I was holding*
Wow... that was intense.
Author's Response: So was Lisa. Thanks.