2010.02.13 - 08:47PM
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Thank you - fine writing as usual. I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it, and thanks yourself.

2010.02.13 - 01:29AM
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This is so good - I think we all would have assumed the Doctor was going to leave the kids there, and Jack and Rose's escape was so "them". Also, loved the summary!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I tried to write it from Rose\'s and Jack\'s points of view, and I\'m glad if I succeeded in getting that across. And thanks for the kind words about the summary, as well.

2010.02.11 - 04:50PM
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Ah, that was brilliant. Misunderstandings galore, an adventure, and they saved the children. I loved the breathlessness of Jack and Rose trying to escape the flames. And all the give and take as they sorted through the mess they'd all made of things. The ending was perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I\'m glad their pell-mell escape from the fire read reasonably well, and I, too, am glad they managed to sort through it. Heh.

2010.02.11 - 04:25PM
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Loved it!

Author's Response: Glad you did!