Very interesting take on the shag-or-die scenario. I like that in your series, everyone doesn't magically enjoy the whole thing or inexplicably return to the way things used to be 10 minutes later. And I think the aftermath is more interesting than just a graphic telling of the story. Anyway that's a lot of words to say "great job!"
I have to admit that by the end, this story brought a tear to my eye. Glad to see that you decided to continue dealing with the fallout from the events of "By Faith Alone" as it pertains to the Doctor's relationships with Donna and River Song.
This is great. I could hear Donna's voice -- thank you, I miss her!
Oh, that was lovely. A cliche turned upside down and inside-out and somehow in the process it becomes beautiful.