Reviews For I'll Show You Mine

2009.08.27 - 02:48PM
1: Chapter 1

Hee, poor Doctor, he tries so hard.

Author's Response: He does, but it\'s a forgone conclusion that Dax will win. Every time. I bet she\'d even find a way to beat out Jack. Thanks for reading!

2009.08.22 - 04:51AM
1: Chapter 1

Now there must be another story with Jack let loose on DS9! Loved the banter between Dax and Jack too. Can imagine it was quite nice to discuss battle wounds with another being that 'does not die'. They'd make an awesome trio - though Worf might not be too pleased.

Author's Response: Oh! Can you imagine the banter between Jack and Quark? Or Jack and Worf? Or, pretty much Jack and anyone one DS9? Could be lots of fun. Thanks for reading!

2009.08.22 - 03:22AM
1: Chapter 1

In general, the concept is both highly amusing and rather interesting, but there's just one flaw; it was the SIXTH Doctor who died of head trauma (Although the novel "Spiral Scratch" revealed that he was also suffering from a chronal energy drain at the time), while the Fourth Doctor died after falling off a radio tower and hitting the ground REALLY hard...

That aside, fascinating bit of work with a rather amusing ending; keep it up!

Author's Response: Yeah, that was a bit of creative license on my part as well; after all they never said exactly what Four\'s injuries were. It could\'ve been head trauma. Thanks for reading and commenting!.

2009.08.21 - 09:14PM
1: Chapter 1

*giggle* As a mother? Perfect last line.

Author's Response: Thanks, I had fun with it too!

2009.08.21 - 08:17PM
1: Chapter 1

Ha! Very, very amusing and well done.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!