2010.06.29 - 03:18PM
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That was another fantastic story I don't review often as i don't find many worth reviewing but this beats all of the stories i have read. It was perfect good amount of Romance, angst, Drama and Family. I was so happy that Ianto didn't die i always worry about that when i start reading a fiction it can ruin it for me. Like i said before yours was perfect and i can't wait to read more of your work.

2009.08.19 - 09:52PM
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A nice, quiet story, full of gentle desperation. Another example of why you are on my favorite authors list.

2009.08.17 - 10:50PM
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I don't comment very often, but I'm really starting to fall in love with your stories. I like that you didn't make things easy. There were no immediate confessions of love. They had to work for their happiness. I did wonder, the way Jack was acting, whether Ianto wasn't still around, and was glad to see I'd guessed correctly.
Another reader commented on chapter length. I actually like them like this, so I suppose it's just a matter of taste. I opened a new tab this morning, sneakily read a bit at work, then finished once I got home. Thank you for another wonderful story.

2009.08.17 - 09:07AM
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Wow that was lovely. I read it all in one go as I am in bed ill at the moment and it really kept me interested and engaged the whole time. I like the Timey Whimeyness and the Epilogue too. There is another story in that epilogue - the Doctor making Ianto immortal - that I would love to read.

Just one small concrit - it might be worth chopping it into chapters. 22,000 words in one go is a bit daunting and it's hard to read some and then come back - Teaspoon doesn't have a bookmark :D

Well done on a fab story.