I looove this - and generally I hate anything to do with the changing of someones gender, except that you have handled it in a mature and interesting way - and have believable plot leading up to it.
Not to mention the characterisation of the Doctor is spot on. (In particular his initial awkwardness and embarrassment I found exceptionally believable.)
I look forward to reading more of his quite clever fic.
So what happens when he gets a period? lol
Nice chapter! I can't wait to see how this goes. I think the use of síhe and h'er was a brilliant idea- works perfectly. Good for Jack being such a rock with h'er. Shall his boyish charms be turned on full force in the water?
I have to disagree with sentarla. The he/she goes with the Jack pov section of the story and fits perfectly with Jack's confusion and sympathy for the Doctor.
great story so far, to make it easier and to stop annoyance, it would be better to refer to the doctor as she or her, instead of the him/her. It's okay for the first few times, but after that, it distracts from the story. Please update again soon!
This the very best of this type of story I've ever read, AND your characterization is right on too.
The only thing missing is the backstory. How did this actually happen? I'm hoping when the Doctor explains everything to Jack He'll flashback to the event.
Hmm interesting start.
Ooooooookay. I definitely want to see where you're going with this.