Reviews For Without a Line

2009.06.08 - 07:47PM
1: Chapter 1

I liked your portrait of Lisa.... not a helpless victim.. she knew what she wanted and made the concessions to get it.


Author's Response: Thank you!

2009.06.08 - 07:21PM
1: Chapter 1

Ouch, ouch, ouch.

I love your Lisa. An adult. I was always the "I don't care where you have lunch as long as you come home for supper" type myself, although I was given to understand that that made me a weird person.

And poor Ianto. Talk about getting fucked in more ways than one!

Author's Response: Well, it occurred to me as I was writing it that it made sense for Lisa and Jack to be similar in certain ways. So I\'m glad it worked for you!