I read this again yesterday, then again today, along with your next piece. I don't know how many times I've read them, but they always move me emotionally. I love the maturity you find in Rose that is totally in line with her life experiences and her experiences on the TARDIS, and not out of line with her age. This piece showcases how real you make her.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I know that somewhere along the way, I\'ve become known for writing kinky smut. I don\'t object to that. But I really started out wanting to be known for my character work, so it\'s delightful to hear this.
Ahhhhhh! Lovely. Poignant, with flashes of humor from both Rose and Jack ("
"I like this track...." Hahaha!). Fabulous ending lines, as well. A one-two punch with love being "so much worse" and then Jack's sudden realization that he really is in over his head, in more ways (or with more people) than one. Awesome vignette.
Author's Response: Thank you! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :)