2011.01.20 - 07:34PM
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I love this story though I didn't see Sarah Jane's death coming(well I started to but t

then when the Doctor had a plane I didn't then i started to again) but I wanted to Rani Clyde to find out thank you for dropping a message and even better with Marie though

did the Tenth come in at the end I know he did in the middle but did he at the end or was that still the Fourth Doctor?

Author's Response: Hi :) Yes, it was Ten who came back in at the end, because he knew he was always suppose to be there, and why.

2011.01.06 - 08:13PM
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This is beautifully written and terribly sad but with a smidgen of hope that we can find in the real world. It's brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was one of those ideas that I just couldn\'t let go of :)

2009.12.10 - 03:52PM
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Oh yes, tissue warning please! That was wonderfully, beautifully in character and I bawled. I've been wanting to read more Luke-interacts-with-the-Doctor fic, and this story fit the bill perfectly, albeit sadly. Good job! :)

2009.06.05 - 12:25AM
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Everything was in character and entirely plausible. It was an incredibly sad and beautiful story - I cried at the end, just like at the end of the new 2nd and 4th series.

2009.05.23 - 12:23AM
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Tissue warnings are definitely required for this fic. I've never seen the Sarah Jane Adventures yet - but Luke's characterization stands on its own. Brilliant working of the timey wimey stuff to fit this story into the canon universe as well. This was a most touching story - exactly how I would picture Sarah at the Doctor.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I really wanted to pull in elements of the current Doctor to bring out the past Doctor in one big timey-wimey causality loop.

2009.05.22 - 11:12PM
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That was really, really good. Very well written and everyone was in character - great stuff. I was gripped right up until the end.

Author's Response: Cheers! Its my first story, but one that had been digging around my head for weeks and just demanded to be written.