I love this story though I didn't see Sarah Jane's death coming(well I started to but t
then when the Doctor had a plane I didn't then i started to again) but I wanted to Rani Clyde to find out thank you for dropping a message and even better with Marie though
did the Tenth come in at the end I know he did in the middle but did he at the end or was that still the Fourth Doctor?
Author's Response: Hi :) Yes, it was Ten who came back in at the end, because he knew he was always suppose to be there, and why.
This is beautifully written and terribly sad but with a smidgen of hope that we can find in the real world. It's brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was one of those ideas that I just couldn\'t let go of :)
Oh yes, tissue warning please! That was wonderfully, beautifully in character and I bawled. I've been wanting to read more Luke-interacts-with-the-Doctor fic, and this story fit the bill perfectly, albeit sadly. Good job! :)
Everything was in character and entirely plausible. It was an incredibly sad and beautiful story - I cried at the end, just like at the end of the new 2nd and 4th series.
Tissue warnings are definitely required for this fic. I've never seen the Sarah Jane Adventures yet - but Luke's characterization stands on its own. Brilliant working of the timey wimey stuff to fit this story into the canon universe as well. This was a most touching story - exactly how I would picture Sarah at the Doctor.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I really wanted to pull in elements of the current Doctor to bring out the past Doctor in one big timey-wimey causality loop.
That was really, really good. Very well written and everyone was in character - great stuff. I was gripped right up until the end.
Author's Response: Cheers! Its my first story, but one that had been digging around my head for weeks and just demanded to be written.