Oh wow, the description you gave Lucy of what it's like to fall in love with a Time Lord... yeah.. wow.
This was a fantastic story. I am looking forward to kore collaborations between you two. I enjoyed this thoroughly, and I heard through the grapevine that there's a sequel... YAY!!!
I just found this piece and read it right through. An interesting look at the relationship between the trio. The very human concerns that he isn't good enough or doesn't quite fit in. An inferiorit complex compared with the full time Lord. The adventure and reunion of all the companions was wonderful. Like having the Scooby gang all together again but heaps better and sexier. Itimate scenes were very hot and once again this fan girl longs to be Rose. Two doctors gah. Thanks for a great read.
"he slammed his hand down on to the button..." and then what?? Don't leave us hanging like that, it's just cruel! :p
This can only end in tears. Hopefully Lucy's and not Rose's, because then I think I'd have to cry as well :)
uh oh this just can't be good.
This story is just getting better and better. Every chapter pulls me deeper into the story. Thanks for making the characters seem so real. I love reading your work.
LOL when I read about Jack's parking. He is so very in character!
Hope Team Tardis gets to the Doctors soon!!!
Uh oh...Tardis crew, HURRY!! HURRY!!!
I really like your interpretation of Lucy here. The last scene threw me quite a bit because at first I really couldn't imagine Lucy being that forceful with anyone, but then taking into account her devotion to the Master and the fact that she's not quite all there....I can start to see it. I think what I like most is that you've, in my opinion anyway, made her very....Rose-like in a way, if Rose were crazy like Lucy. Willing to do anything for her Master. Very nice job, I'm interested to see where you're taking this!
Curiouser and curiouser. Very, very interesting all this. Can't wait for more!
was not expecting this. hmm few ideas goin bout my head, cant wait to see if any of them may be right. :D
Interesting turn of events. I have an idea of what may be going on. Now I'll patiently wait and see...
Ooooo! I don't like this, not one little bit! Do they realize they have the human? I'm scared, but really enjoying.
Oh, dear! I don't know what to think. A Doctor trap! Did they intend to get the human or the TimeLord I wonder?
It's too bad the TimeLord is giving the human so little support. Lots going on in this story, nice multi-layered tale. Eagerly awaiting more!
It is steaming and yet it is always going to be sadly competative, isn't it? Surely there must be a time when the Timelord feels a little inadequate too? I am loving this btw!!!