2009.02.10 - 05:33PM
1: Begining

Short, sweet, and clever:) I like what you did with it:)

Author's Response: thank you

2009.02.10 - 04:01PM
1: Begining

Very visual and abstract. I like that. "...Fourteen as he points an accusing finger at Fourteen." Was that supposed to be 13 pointing at 14? I haven't read the previous story, so I don't follow it all. Anyway, well done.

Author's Response: Yes, yes it was, i made a mistake