2009.02.01 - 02:01AM
1: Chapter 1

I will bathe in the dust and walk in the sea...

Nice, very nice.

2009.02.01 - 12:14AM
1: Chapter 1

This is so beautifully written and well-observed. I loved the metaphor of the thread and the lyrical...wistfulness of it all.

Wonderful.

2009.01.31 - 08:55PM
1: Chapter 1

This is very lovely. Lyrical.

2009.01.31 - 08:41PM
1: Chapter 1

This is really lovely; I particularly love the image of the thread.