2009.01.04 - 10:05PM
1: Chapter 1

Wooo! this was great!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

2009.01.04 - 06:41PM
1: Chapter 1

I rather liked this! Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you!

2009.01.04 - 02:49PM
1: Chapter 1

This was a great story. I like that Jack explained what the gun was and the Children understood he was afraid -- even if he didn't.

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you enjoyed this story. Thanks for taking the time to respond!