2008.12.31 - 02:23PM
3: Voo Don't

Fascinating! You've done a marvelous job integrating the elements of the novels into this tale. Its complexity and elegance are tempered by your patented humor and true gift of words.

I particularly enjoyed this line: '...as if he were adopting long-used and familiar emotions as one might shrug into an old jumper.' What an evocative simile, and so apt.

Keep going, please!