Reviews For Him

2010.08.23 - 12:12AM
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This is breathtaking beautiful. All the heartbreak of Rose being unsure and the Doctor waiting. It is so true to life, and not an easy fix as I have read in many fic's in that it makes sense....

Love the last line, he did not need the Tardis like she didn't need two hearts.Perfect...

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked it! Yeah, by the looks on their faces at the end of JE, there was no way that transition was going to be easy, lol! Thank you for reading!

2010.08.13 - 06:19AM
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Seems I found this a bit later than most. Having seen far too many "instant, perfect happiness" versions of this story though I have to say none of them can hold hold a candle to what you've done with this.

If I were to be picky, the only line I would have changed, had I been good enough to write it to begin with, would have been this one;

“Tell me,” he whispered once more against her chest, his breath faint. “If you believe I’m him.”

I'd have gone with "me" rather than "him". Still love it though, and adding it to favs.

Author's Response: Ooooh OOOOoooooOOOh I should\'ve, lol! I think you\'re right. When I wrote it I wanted to keep with the title but you\'re right, that would\'ve helped the transition. I\'m going to run it by my friend and see if she agrees with you and if she does I\'ll change it! Thanks! :)

2008.11.21 - 09:10PM
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I thoroughly enjoyed this, from its' angsty beginning (how it should be) to its' hopeful end. Spot on characterizations.

Author's Response: Awesome! I\'m happy I got them! The Doctor is so hard to write, lol. :S

2008.11.18 - 08:10PM
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Aww that was beautiful but so heartbreaking as well in the beginning! Poor Doctor, I can understand how confused Rose must have been but he never stopped loving her throuhgout. Bless him. Lovely written fic! Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I just didn\'t see them having an easy go in the beginning. Eventually yes, but not in the beginning. This was just my take on it. :)

2008.11.18 - 01:35PM
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This is lyrically beautiful, tragic and hopeful all mixed together.

Author's Response: Wow, ty for the kind words. :) Especially the targic part, lol! I\'m an angst writer, I like to think. XD

Author's Response: Wow, ty for the kind words. :) Especially the targic part, lol! I\'m an angst writer, I like to think. XD

Author's Response: Oh wow. I meant tragic* up there. >.<

2008.11.08 - 02:25PM
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Oh, you absolutely captured the painful angst that would absolutely be them in the beginning, and Rose's slow acceptance was incredibly realistic.
Of course, I'd hope that the Doctor wouldn't be this passive in waiting for Rose, because Lord knows human!Doc would have sooo many more issues to deal with...But you wrote this so brilliantly that it WORKS.
LOVE IT!! I hope to read more of your work!! ::favs this::

Author's Response: Oooooh ty! I actually have an epic I\'m working on with TimeLord Ten and Rose which is...killing me but coming along pretty well I think. I\'ll post soon. Ty! :)

2008.11.08 - 02:23PM
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So gorgeous. Loved the last two lines especially. Sorry, you made me lose the ability to write complete sentences.

Author's Response: No prob and ty! If anything has that effect on me then usually that\'s a very good sign. :)

2008.11.07 - 09:18PM
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That was lovely:)

Author's Response: Ty^^ I\'m glad you liked it!