I read this a while ago. It's something a bit different and I really like it. I'm not sure if I'm missing anything I need to know, but this is a really nice piece of work.
Author's Response: Thankyou very very much! Yeah, I was tryign to tell a story a bit differently... it\'s hard in these things to know how much you can put in without it becoming too much of an exposition - and therefore losing integrity and well, losing the point- and I wasn\'t sure it quite worked, glad to hear (read? :)) it did for you!