2009.01.22 - 08:46PM
1: Chapter 1

This is brilliant from beginning to end! The very last word absolutely killed me. LOL

2008.10.29 - 03:24PM
1: Chapter 1

Many LOLs! Thanks for posting this. It's fun when I can't even decide which was my favorite line.

2008.10.28 - 03:48AM
1: Chapter 1

--- "You know," said Romana, "I sometimes worry that we're misrepresenting the species."

"I think we're exploding myths about Gallifreyan sexuality."

"Please don't mention Gallifrey and exploding in the same sentence." ---

Ouch! But also, misrepresenting the species? YES. And I love them for it. Brilliant fic, had me laughing from start to finish.

2008.10.28 - 01:44AM
1: Chapter 1

She turned the page. "Do wish I had tentacles?"

--- I think there should be a "you" in there somewhere.

This was absolute genius from start to finish. *love*

2008.10.28 - 12:56AM
1: Chapter 1

I think I feel sorry for the tentacles. ;) And yes, mentions of Gallifrey should be made very carefully. Or possibly just avoided, considering.

2008.10.28 - 12:45AM
1: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for making me laugh out loud not once, but many times! This was so delightfully, refreshingly, sophisticatedly, stupidly, funny!