Reviews For Irresistible Force

2011.08.25 - 03:12PM
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This was a very entertaining story, and the best I've found on Teaspoon in ages.

2011.05.08 - 05:23PM
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Wonderful! As other reviewer have said, the Doctor is so much himself here, and the OC is engaging, realistic and leads us through the plot without dominating it. Great stuff.

2010.09.05 - 03:55PM
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That was wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed every every sentence. Pitch perfect.

2008.06.07 - 12:01PM
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Excellent story. The narrator has a distinct and convincing voice, and you've got Five's personality just right. My only tiny quibble is that I think that kissing a human would be closer to kissing someone else's pet hamster or kitten, rather than an iguana. We are "quite [his] favourite species," after all.

CakeorDeath
2008.05.22 - 03:26PM
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Fantastic OC and great plot I was rivited to the screen (as it were).

Well done :)

2008.05.14 - 12:36AM
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What a wonderful story! I came here via your webpage ... I've long been a fan of your Snape/Maud stories (I still feel fuzzy when I read the Beekeeper reference at the end of one of them) and was delighted to see that you write Doctor Who as well!

2007.03.22 - 01:13AM
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That was brillant! A terrific OC, amazing voice, and a riveting plot. As an added bonus I knew the city you were talking about. The Doctor comes to Canada. Yeah!

2006.06.27 - 03:59PM
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Very impressive piece of work, and I echo all of the above praises. Very good job developing your villian. You convey a great deal of necessary information, yet never info-dump. One critique is that your protagonist, far from being a Mary-Sue, doesn't get very much to do here. Her decision to involve herself in the Doctor's business seems a little odd, seeing as she has very little to contribute to his efforts. I'm surprised the Doctor tolerates her tagging along as well as he does!

2006.01.24 - 06:25PM
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That. Was. Stupendous. A really cracking plot, a great OC, and you make the first person/present tense really work for you (which not many do!). Most of all, I think you perfectly capture the Fifth Doctor with this. I think it's probably the most complete fic characterisation of him I've encountered yet: he's absolutely walking off the page. Oh, and the haircut stuff was just adorable! Hope you write more of Fivey!

Author's Response: I\'m really delighted that you think so! Thanks so much for your thoughtful, specific comments.

harmonyfb
2005.04.30 - 03:02AM
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This was *lovely* - an interesting villain, a good story, and an OC that wasn't a Mary Sue. I'm off to read your other stories. :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm especially grateful to hear the "wasn't a Mary Sue" part -- it's always a tricky balance when writing OFC's, and I know tastes vary widely in that respect, so one can never be quite sure one's hit the mark... thanks for the encouraging feedback.

Stmarysalice
2005.02.14 - 12:37PM
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I have been having a terrifically crap past couple of days, and spent my time toggling to your 'Dr.' stories in between spreadsheets. You have really brightened my mood. Thank you for sharing your stories.