2010.02.11 - 03:07AM
3: Chapter 3

Well, that makes sense; take the wrong guy out of time and a cult continues to exist long enough to summon Lord Yu to Earth before it's ready to fight off a direct assault.

Funny how simple things can have such far-reaching consequences; it's one reason I like AUs so much, I suppose.

Keep up the ever-fascinating work!

2010.02.10 - 01:17PM
2: Chapter 2

While the question of what McKay did to screw things up to this extent while leaving HIM all right is a definite question, so far what you've got seems interesting; I look forward to seeing how the Doctor deals with a temporal alteration on this scale in future chapters.

Keep up the good work!

2009.11.30 - 07:18PM
1: Chapter 1

Seriously, you CANNOT leave this story on a cliffhanger like THAT; where's the next chapter?

Author's Response: I\'m sorry for the cliffhang. I had it all finished and then changed my mind about some of it. It\'s finished again now and I am just waiting on my beta to go through it. the rest should be coming very soon. Thanks for sticking with me and for the reviews!

2008.09.24 - 09:43PM
1: Chapter 1

Interesting concept. I think Sano over-reacted a bit, but not too bad; and Kenshin very rarely refers to himself as "I", he usually refers to himself as "this one". Otherwise, I enjoyed the story. I take it that the time disturbance is where Stargate comes in? Continuum, Moebius or not based on an episode? I'm looking forward to finding out!

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip. I haven\'t written a Kenshin fic before so it\'s a work in progress.