Reviews For Out of Order

2009.11.30 - 07:14PM
6: Chapter 6

Might have worked better with NYSSA as a companion for the Fifth Doctor rather than Peri- Peri clearly DIDN'T know about regeneration when the Doctor did it in "Caves of Androzani"-, but otherwise a very effective multi-Doctor story that gave the Doctors and their companions a highly engaging chance to shine.

Author's Response: You are quite right. I had originally had Nyssa in there, but she didn\'t work with the time line that i had set up for the series. I guess I just wasn\'t really thinking when I put Peri in there instead. I\'m going to go back and rework some of it now. Thanks very much for pointing that out.

2008.09.22 - 03:55PM
4: Chapter 4

Things are DEFINITELY not looking good. I like how plotty your stories are. It's very nice.

2008.09.20 - 01:49AM
1: Chapter 1

Wonderful tension. On the edge of my seat here! Please update soon!

2008.09.20 - 12:52AM
1: Chapter 1

Quite the start! I'm more than a bit concerned for the Doctor at the moment. and Peri. Eep!