Turlough's comment at the end is cracky. In fact: TBFDBILTH
Loving the continuation of this bunch of stories. Please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope to update this soon.
Spelling issue aside, I'm really enjoying this. I always love a good hurt/comfort tale and hope you'll continue this one soon.
Author's Response: That was a BIG spelling mistake of my behalf. Thanks for picking it up.
:)
I like it, you've got the voices down quite well. The misspelling of Hypothermia isn't really that big a deal right now, but it will be if the story continues much further.
Other than that one thing, it's a nice start and I hope to read more ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks for picking it up. That would have been very embarassing if no one told me, or if I didn\'t work it out.
Thank you again :)
Um, shouldn't it be hypothermia?
In any case, I'm enjoying your stories!
Author's Response: Whoops, thanks heaps for the big spelling pick up. :)
Thanks or you review.
Author's Response: There I go again, I meant for not or.