Reviews For Hypothermia

2010.01.25 - 08:00PM
1: Hypothermia

Turlough's comment at the end is cracky. In fact: TBFDBILTH

2008.09.03 - 09:50PM
1: Hypothermia

Loving the continuation of this bunch of stories. Please continue.

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope to update this soon.

2008.09.03 - 12:00PM
1: Hypothermia

Spelling issue aside, I'm really enjoying this. I always love a good hurt/comfort tale and hope you'll continue this one soon.

Author's Response: That was a BIG spelling mistake of my behalf. Thanks for picking it up. :)

2008.09.02 - 07:02PM
1: Hypothermia

I like it, you've got the voices down quite well. The misspelling of Hypothermia isn't really that big a deal right now, but it will be if the story continues much further.
Other than that one thing, it's a nice start and I hope to read more ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks for picking it up. That would have been very embarassing if no one told me, or if I didn\'t work it out. Thank you again :)

2008.09.02 - 04:30PM
1: Hypothermia

Um, shouldn't it be hypothermia?

In any case, I'm enjoying your stories!

Author's Response: Whoops, thanks heaps for the big spelling pick up. :) Thanks or you review.

Author's Response: There I go again, I meant for not or.