Actually, scratch that comment about thesaurus abuse; the voice does sound like Six, and too much is worse than too little in that respect.
Since I just favorited this fic, I thought I should drop by and review it as well. In short, it's a lovely story. The emotions are fantastically done and the central problem is very, very real. Also, I do like the fact that Six—being Six—thinks offhandedly about Peri's small, limited brain, but he is also absolutely willing to *smash down her door* to comfort her. I have to admit to using more thesaurus abuse when I write Six, but your look into his emotions feels absolutely and utterly real.
This was interesting. It very much touches on the problems that the two of them face, and the trauma of the regeneration. I would have liked a bit more of what their relationship was like bar this circumstance -- everything is so dramatic, and they tease each other a lot in the actual show. (I think it's teasing and not really fighting.) Something of that comraderie would have been nice to see, and something of Six's blessed arrogance, too. But good attempt. Keep up the good work.
This was extremely well done. Very good depiction of both Six and Peri. I love to see this softer sides of Six and to see stories that explore his post-regenerative actions. And I liked how you had a nice hint of Six/Peri but didn't really push it. Made it more believable, I think. This story was very sweet. One of my favorite reads so far.
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you liked it!
Great! Very unique, you wrote both characters very well. I also liked the end, very cute and not to serious. Perfect :) I hope I can see some more Six fanfic from you, like many people have said, it's quite hard to find good ones!
Author's Response: Thanks! Six is, I think, a huge well of angst, and it\'s royally tempting to go over the top with it. Can\'t promise the next one won\'t, though. ;)
That was pretty cool.
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Thank you for writing and sharing. There is a serious lackage of good Six fic on here, and that was definitely GOOD six fic!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!